Revision

I'm currently revising my piece "the trouble with tutoring." I found the workshop to be helpful in helping highlight some things that definitely needed changing. I'm really focusing on the introduction because it needs to be more in tune with the subject of the novel. The hardest part is figuring out what to take out/elaborate on because there are parts i really want to keep but in actual fact may serve as a detriment to the overall focus of the story.